Eric Heaton a&b responses.
Tuesday, April 12, 2016
A&B Chapter 17 skill 5 and 6
When writing a longer paper, it is important to
be aware of the fact that you are taking your reader on a journey. As with any journey it can be incredibly easy
for one to get lost without a proper guides or signs to help them on their
way. One of the most basic signs that
you can give your reader is the placement of the topic sentence. When the reader begins their journey into a
paragraph on your paper the first thing that they see is what they will be
expecting to read about or discover as they continue on throughout your
paper. If you don’t clearly state you
audience what each paragraph is trying to convey then the reader could receive
an entirely different message from that paragraph. Another way to make sure that your reader
stays on topic is by carefully managing the old and new information that you
present to the reader. As you explain
each part your argument or information start by bringing up the familiar
information that they have already encountered.
Finally a way to make sure that the reader stays on the carefully laid
out path that you have set up, you can use specific “signpost” words to show
them what to expect. These words such as
“first” “for example” “therefore” “however” etc. make your reader expect a
twist or turn in the path, they are expecting it and it will you as the author
to make your point more clear.
Monday, April 11, 2016
A&B Chapter 17 section 3 and 4
When beginning an essay or a persuasive paper of any kind,
making sure that you have a good solid knowledge of how you want to write your
paper and where you want to go with it will make the entire writing process
significantly smoother and will help you write a better paper. When starting your paper a very important
decision you want to make is what to title your paper. Your title should give the reader, at a
glance, what you are going to be writing about.
It may not show your argument but it should let the reader know what
they should expect to be reading about.
After you have decided on an effective title you can move on to how you
want to structure your introduction and conclusion. An important decision you need to make here
is when you want to tell your audience what your personal stance is. If you state your stance early on you give
your audience a clear understanding on what this paper is going to be about and
what you will be arguing about. You
could also place your thesis at the end of the introduction, allowing the
reader to think about the topic at hand and make a decision for themselves on
what point they agree with before knowing your point of view. Finally if you want your reader to have as
much information as possible and to be able to see all sides of the argument
before making your side clear, you can wait till the conclusion to state your
position and argument. Each of these
methods have different effects and deciding on how you would like your audience
to react to them will shape the rest of your paper.
Monday, April 4, 2016
A&B Ch. 15 Skill 1 writing a proposal.
One form of rhetoric that is commonly is known as a
proposal. A proposal, as it may sound,
is presenting an idea to a group with the goal of getting people to change and
take action on some topic or with some part of a group’s life. When pondering about how to go about this
proposal there are many factors that should be considered. First is you need to show your audience that
there is in fact a problem that needs to be brought up. This can be one of the hardest parts of the proposal
as most people are naturally evasive of change and when they hear that there is
something with the way that they have always done something, they tend to want
to fight back. Your goal is to make sure
that they understand the problem as clearly as possible. Once you get your audience convinced that
something needs to be changes you can move onto the second thing: presenting a
solution. Whenever a problem is pointed
out it is always key to provide a solution.
If you have a person who is constantly saying that there is something
wrong but have no idea how to fix the problems then all they will accomplish is
annoying people. You need to show to
people that you know what you are talking about, how to fix it and that it’s
the best solution out there. In this
portion you could also bring up other people’s proposals for solutions and show
either why yours would be more effective or why theirs wouldn’t solve the
problem like yours would. And third, you
need to show the people that this will not cost them too much, whether it be
time, money, or effort, you need to show to the people that this is be better
for them or people in general in the long run.
Thursday, March 31, 2016
A&B Ch. 7 skill 4, annotated bibliography
An annotated bibliography is a list of sources for a given
topic, to make it easier for a person who has done research or will be doing
research to organize and cleanly present their information. This bibliography is generally organized
alphabetically listing each of the sources that the author used in a particular
set of research. There are two main ways
to go about an annotated bibliography, first is a summary-only annotation. This form is where when creating the
bibliography the author will focus strictly on presenting the information that
the source provides. It shows the
authors use of rhetoric and simply tells you what is in each source. The other form is called an evaluative
annotation. In this form the author will
not only provide a summary of the various sources but will also give their own
personal evaluation of the article or the source, writing how they personally
feel on the effectiveness of the article.
No matter the style the author chooses, the annotated bibliography
shouldn’t exceed 150 words, it should be clear and concise allowing any readers
to understand the information clearly.
When writing the bibliography, the author should pay special attention
to three topics. First the rhetorical
information, show how the rhetoric was used and how well it was used. Second, summarize the content of the
source. Tell the reader what is there. Finally evaluate the source, if the author
were doing a summary they would focus on how they would use it in their article
or research, if it was exploratory the author would also talk about its strengths,
weaknesses and how useful it was.
Friday, March 25, 2016
A&B Ch.1 skill 1 and Ch. 20 skill 1
One of the keys to writing a good research paper is
having a good topic or a good question to write about. If one were to choose a bad question they may
find themselves stuck in a trap of having too much information to research or
no particular aim. When deciding on a
topic, one of the most important things that one can do is make sure that you
are personally interested in the subject.
Look around for things in your life that make you question the method or
execution of something. This could be
when talking to friends about sports, when in class discussing a topic or on
your free time relaxing on the couch.
Once you find a topic that you are interested in it is good to start
thinking of questions about it. For example you could ask “Do kids have access
to cellphones too early in life?” Are kids spending too much time on their
phones or computers? Does increased time
on computers cause kids to be less patient?
There are many questions one can ask on even a simple topic that can
help narrow it down and make sure that you have a good focused topic to research.
When a topic and a question are finally picked out, you
can ask yourself some follow up questions to verify to yourself that you have a
good topic. You can ask are you
personally interested in this question.
Is the question both problematic and significant? Is the question
limited enough for the intended length of your paper? Is there a reasonable possibility of finding
information on this question based on the time and resources you have
available? Is the question appropriate for
your level of expertise? If you can answer yes to these questions, you are ready
to begin you research paper.
Sunday, February 28, 2016
There are various methods to writing a summary of a specific
paper. How you read the paper, the ideas
you want to focus on, and how objective you want to be all play crucial roles
when writing a summary.
When reading the paper it’s important to know the authors
point of view and what kind of audience you want to be. The two methods of reading a paper are
referred to as reading for the grain and against the grain, reading for the
grain means acting as the ideal audience for the writers purpose, to be for the
idea that is being presented and maybe even thinking of supporting ideas to
improve and build upon the idea presented by the author. Reading against the grain is challenging the
author. For each idea presented you
think of a counter or rebuttal, you want to challenge the author and think of
all the angles the author doesn’t want the reader to notice.
After reading with and against the grain your next focus
should be on the vocabulary that you use, there are many different approaches to
the vocabulary but one should be aware of the differences between “The author
presents” and “The author argues” making sure that you stay objective is the
largest goal when writing a summary.
Sunday, February 21, 2016
A&B Ch 3 skill 3.1 and 3.2
When reading a paper, one thing you should look for is
the author’s use of rhetoric, or his use or persuasion. Every paper will in one form or another try
to persuade you to think or act in the way that the author wants you to. Being able to know what tactics the author is
using, as well as identifying what he is trying to persuade you to do is key in
analyzing any paper.
One of the more basic of tasks that the author will do
to curve your thinking in using a very specific angle of vision. He will put you in the perspective that most
effectively conveys his point while masking as much of the opposing view as
possible. This can be done in various
ways. Through effective use of imagery
the author will specifically describe things in only the way that he needs you
to see them. In the book it mentions two
views of a tundra plain in Alaska. The
first focuses on a company’s point of view, mentioning the temperature, the
length of time that it is cold and the flatness of the area. The opposing view would describe the same
area as booming with life, tons of animals as well as other creatures that
happily thrive in that area.
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